Writing Composition: Paragraph

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Learning the most basic unit in English Composition. First, write a topic sentence that summarizes your point. This is the first sentence of your paragraph. Next, write your argument, or why you feel the topic sentence is true. Finally, present your evidence (facts, quotes, examples, and statistics) to support your argument.
1. Main Ideas in Paragraphs
(Getting the Big Ideas)
Professor Karin S.
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lesson.
2. WHAT’S THE BIG IDEA?
Do you know how to find the “big
ideas” in
paragraphs?
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3. These are the essential parts in
paragraphs.
Main Ideas
Supporting Details
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4. 3 Tips for Finding the
Topic
1. Look for the subject of the first sentence.
Subjects are nouns (persons, places, things, or ideas).
2. Look for a word or phrase that is frequently
repeated or referred to.
3. Finally, ask: What do ALL the sentences in
the paragraph deal with?
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5. Practice with Finding a
Topic
Read to find the topic in this paragraph:
Does watching violence on TV make people more
to violence themselves? Obviously, TV violence has
negative effects. One study found that heavy TV
are more fearful of others. They try to protect
with guns, alarm systems, and security locks on doors.
In the
same study it was found that heavy TV watchers are less
upset about
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picknon-TV
a topic.watchers.
6. Click on the best topic for
the previous paragraph.
A. kids
B. TV watching
C. TV violence
D. real-life violence
eturn if you need to reread paragraph.
7. No, kids are only mentioned in the final
sentence. “Kids” is not the topic of the
entire paragraph.
Click the back arrow and try again.
8. The paragraph does mention TV
watching, but that is too broad a
subject, since TV watchers can see
both good and bad or violent
Click on the back arrow and try
9. Right! The topic, TV violence, is mentioned
in the first sentence and repeated throughout
the paragraph.
Click the forward arrow to see where the topi
10. No, the entire paragraph is not dealing with
“real-life violence”; it is only mentioned in one
Click the back arrow and try again.
11. Finding a Topic
Does watching violence on TV make people more prone to
violence themselves? Obviously, TV violence has some negative
effects. One study found that heavy TV watchers are more fearful of
others. They attempt to protect themselves with guns, alarm
systems, and security locks on doors.
In the same study it was found that heavy TV watchers are less
upset about real-life violence than are non-TV watchers. All of the
violence they see on
TV makes them less sensitive to the real thing. A recent study also
that TV violence increases aggressive behavior in kids and makes
them more that the subject of the 1st sentence is
Notice
likely to select toy guns rather than other kinds of toys.
repeated
throughout the paragraph, and ALL sentences
in the paragraph deal with “TV violence.”
12. Difficulties in Identifying
Topics
 Sometimes the topic is not the
subject of the first sentence.
 Sometimes the topic is not repeated.
 So, if the first 2 strategies don’t
help, here are steps to take:
Look at the nouns within the paragraph.
Ask: What general term includes all or most of
The general noun is probably the
topic.
13. Practice—Read this paragraph.
 1Police officers complain that they arrest
perpetrators who are soon let out on the street.
2Judges argue that they are bound by laws that force
them to free defendants, some of whom may be
guilty as charged, on technicalities. 3Government
officials worry that they don’t have the funds or
space to construct new prisons. 4In addition, many
citizens claim that either the police, the judges, or
the government—or all of the above—are not doing
their jobs. 5Clearly, the way the huge problem of
crime is being handled angers and frustrates many
segments of our society.
What noun suggests the general idea in the
paragraph?
Click the forward button to find out!!!
14. Now look at the paragraph again!
 1Police officers complain that they arrest
perpetrators who are soon let out on the street.
2Judges argue that they are bound by laws that force
them to free defendants, some of whom may be
guilty as charged, on technicalities. 3Government
officials worry that they don’t have the funds or
space to construct new prisons. 4In addition, many
citizens claim that either the police, the judges, or
the government—or all of the above—are not doing
their jobs. 5Clearly, the way the huge problem of
crime is being handled angers and frustrates many
segments of our society.
All of these nouns, plus other words like “arrest”
and CRIME
“guilty” suggest that is the overall topic.
15. To Remember the Strategies--
Use FiRST
This mnemonic (memory trick) will help you recall the
strategies for identifying topics of paragraphs.
F is for subject of the First sentence.
R is for a Repeated word or phrase.
ST means that all sentences deal with the Same
16. Check your memory!
See if you can write from memory the 3 strategies for
identifying the topic of a paragraph. Write them on your
own paper. Then click on the return button to see if you
were correct.
17. Recognizing a Main Idea
Also called controlling idea, central thought,
or gist
Called a thesis when referring to a passage
or long selection
May be stated or unstated (implied)
When stated in a sentence (s) by the author,
the main idea is expressed in the topic
18. Stated Main Ideas—Tips
for Finding Topic
Sentences
The most common place to find the stated main idea
sentence) in non-fiction material is in the first
The second most common place for a stated main
of aisparagraph.
idea in
A the lastsentence
topic sentenceisofaageneral
non-fiction paragraph.
or summary
A brief statement that ends in a plural noun may be
used as
a topic sentence.
19. Keep these suggestions in
mind.
The topic sentence must include the topic within it.
A topic sentence must NOT include details; it is a
A sentence.
topic sentence must NOT contain transitions (terms
“for instance,” “second,” “in addition”) which suggest
A topic sentence may end in a plural noun or contain a
A noun that isthat
sentence a general termby
is followed forathe supporting
statement withdetails.
a
term is NOT the topic sentence.
20. Which of the following could be good
topic sentences? (Click on each of
your choices.)
A. Students go to college for many reasons.
B. Twenty-five students reported having their boo
ks stolen last semester.
C. For smokers and their families, smoking has ma
ny
negative health effects.
D. You can protect your home from burglary by ta
king
several precautions.
E. The second way to improve your grades is to ta
ke
extensive lecture notes.
F. Be sure you find all 4 correct answers before
There are
clicking theseveral steps you should
forward take
arrow before
for the
21. Yes, this sentence is general and suggests
that specific reasons will be given as
supporting details.
It ends in the plural noun “reasons.”
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22. No, this statement is too specific. It mentions a specific
number of students. It seems to be a detail.
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23. Yes, this sentence is general and suggests that specific
effects of smoking will be given as details to support it.
The sentence ends with a plural noun, “effects.”
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24. Correct! The statement indicates that some specific
precautions against burglars will be listed and discussed
as supporting details.
It ends with the plural word “precautions.”
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25. No, this sentence appears to be a specific
detail. The word “second” suggests that a first
detail has already been given and a third will
likely follow it.
You should be careful. The sentence ends in
the plural word “notes,” but that is not always
proof the sentence is a general one.
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26. Yes, this statement mentions “steps” and
indicates that the paragraph that includes
it will provide specific steps for the home
seller to take.
This time the plural word “steps” is not at
the end of the sentence, but it does point
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27. A Topic Sentence May Be
Thought
of as an “Umbrella” Statement
Main Idea
supporting details
The other sentences are covered or included under
heading of the main idea. Supporting details
28. Sample Paragraph
Topic Sentence is Highlighted
1The high cost of college causes many problems
students today. 2For one thing, it keeps some
students from
attending college in the first place. 3Also, high
tuitions affect
the amount of time available for study. 4Because
loans and
scholarships are not easy to get, many students have
put the paragraph carefully. Note the topic.
inThen ask: hours at work in order to afford an
numerous
How do you know the first sentence is the topic
29. How can you recognize a
topic sentence in this
paragraph?
1The high cost of college causes many problems for students
today. 2For one thing, it keeps some students from attending
college in the first place. 3Also, high tuitions affect the amount
of time available for study. 4Because loans and scholarships are
not easy to get, many students have to put in numerous hours at
work in order to afford an education. 5Finally, those who do
manage to get loans know they must begin their careers with
largefirst
The debts.
sentence includes the topic, “the high cost of
The first sentence is general; it is an “umbrella
The first sentence contains a plural noun, “problems,”
then the
 other sentences name specific problems.
Other sentences in the paragraph use transitions,
such as
“also” and “finally,” which point to details. They
30. Practice with Finding a
Stated Main Idea (Topic
Sentence)
Select the topic sentence in this paragraph; click on your choice
1
Cocaine is considered today to be both a major social and
medical problem. 2Just a century ago, however, cocaine was
treated as a harmless stimulant and cure-all. 3Scientists, such as
Sigmund Freud, freely used cocaine. 4Coca Cola’s original formula
actually included three parts coca leaves (the source of cocaine) to
one part cola nut. 5Coca Cola was originally advertised as a
delicious drink as well as a medicine to “cure all nervous
afflictions.” What
6
It was often prescribed for headaches, depression, and
is the number of the topic sentence ?
many other ills.
A. Sentence 1
B. Sentence 2
C. Sentence 4
D. Sentence 5
31. Incorrect. The topic is “cocaine,” but the first sentence
is concerned with how cocaine is viewed today.
There are no details to support that cocaine is a major
problem today.
Click on the back arrow and try again.
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32. That’s right. The second sentence contrasts
with the first, so it does not support the first.
All the sentences after sentence 2 give
details to prove that cocaine was considered
harmless over a century ago. Click the back
arrow to reread the paragraph or the forward
arrow to continue.
Remember this: If the second sentence of a
uses a contrast term, the first sentence is NOT the
sentence. In other words, the second sentence is
showing the author is changing direction.
33. Incorrect. Sentence 4 is a detail giving the
original formula for Coca Cola. It is not the
overall idea of the paragraph.
Click the back arrow and try again.
Return to question.
34. Incorrect. The fifth sentence is giving a specific detail. It
helps to prove that cocaine was considered to be a cure-all
for many health problems.
Click on the back arrow and try again.
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35. Steps for Recognizing
an Implied Main Idea
Read the entire paragraph.
Decide what the topic is.
Ask: What is the general idea that all the
sentences seem
to support?
Mentally compose a sentence that seems to
summarize all
that the paragraph has to say about the topic.
mainthe best
idea youparaphrase of that sentence.
choose should
1) be a complete sentence,
2) include the topic of the
paragraph, and
3) avoid specific details.
36. Practicing Implied Main
Ideas
Read to discover the implied main idea in this paragraph:
1
College students must attend classes for several hours each
day. 2When in class, they must listen carefully to their professors and
take careful notes. 3In addition, students must spend many hours
reading difficult textbooks that deal with many varied subjects.
Furthermore, college
students must take a few hours daily to complete homework
and to prepare for regular exams. 5Besides all this, they must
Click
do on the
research forward
papers button
and write to select the best
essays.
statement of
the implied main idea for this paragraph.
37. The best statement of the implied main idea for the
previous paragraph is:
1. Taking notes is a difficult task for many students.
2. College students have to do a lot of homework.
3. Tests and research are very important requirements
for college students.
4. College students must spend much time doing
everything that is required of them.
eturn to reread paragraph, if necessary
38. “Taking notes is a difficult task for many students.”
Incorrect!
Taking notes is only one of many tasks that are
mentioned. It is not a general statement. Also,
since the topic, “college students,” is not named
in
the sentence, it cannot be a main idea
statement.
Click the return arrow to reread the paragraph.
39. “College students have to do a lot of homework.”
Incorrect. This statement does not summarize the
paragraph because some of the details included in
the paragraph, such as taking notes in classes, is not
a part
of homework. Click the return arrow to reread the
paragraph.
40. “Tests and research are very important requirements for
college students.”
Incorrect. “Tests” and “research” are specific
details about what is expected of college
students. It is not a general statement of the
main idea.
Click on the back arrow to reread the paragraph.
41. “College students must spend much time doing everythin
that is required of them.”
Good! This is the best main idea statement. Many
time-
consuming tasks are mentioned as being
requirements for
college students: attending classes, taking notes,
reading
textbooks, doing homework, studying for exams,
writing
essays, and doing research.
42. REVIEW QUIZ
Click on True or False for each statement
1) True False All sentences in a paragraph
must have
something
2) True False toAnother
do with name
the topic.
for a main idea is
the controlling idea.
3) True False Every paragraph must have a
topic sentence.
4) True False A contrast word in the second
sentence
may False
5) True help theThe
reader
maininidea
selecting the topic
of a longer
sentence.
passage is often called a thesis.
43. Excellent! Return to complete the
quiz.
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44. Sorry. Any sentence that doesn’t deal with the topic
belongs in a different paragraph.
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45. Yes, the main idea can also be called the central thought
or gist.
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46. Incorrect. There are several names for the main idea.
“Controlling thought” is one of them.
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47. Wrong! If a paragraph has an unstated main idea, it has
no topic sentence.
Click to return to finish the quiz.
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48. You are absolutely correct!
Go back to complete the quiz.
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49. Right! If the second sentence uses a contrast
term
(but, however, although, on the other hand,
etc.), it
indicates that the author is contradicting, not
supporting, what was said in the first sentence.
The
second sentence may be the topic sentence,
but the
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first sentence will not be.
Click the arrow to return to the quiz.
50. Incorrect! If the second sentence contradicts the first,
the reader knows that the first sentence is not the topic
sentence.
Now go back to complete the quiz.
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51. Well done! You have another correct response, and you
have completed the quiz.
You have learned much about topics and main ideas. Your
new skill will help you learn from your textbooks and pass
the State Exit Exam in Reading.
52. Incorrect. The main idea of an essay or long article is
usually called the thesis. You have completed the quiz.
You may wish to return to the quiz to try the questions aga
After a review of this short quiz, ask the lab assistant
for a copy of the post-test to show what you have learned!
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quiz HAPPY READING!!